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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:51:09 GMT -8
Challenge 6: Edgy
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:55:09 GMT -8
Mona: Anya: Mona, you want out there, I mean really out there. You went out there enough that you look like you're from outer space. It has that edginess to it that I was looking for that different strange look that turns into an amazing photo, you caught me with everything in this shot, from the flowy fabric to the pink on those lips. Great work once again, Mona. Jessica: Nothing more to say that hasnt been said. Good Job! Tyyyrraaa: Mhmmm, you like that there scarf giiirl and you are working it with a bit of wind thrown in there. And the shape of your head is fiiieerce giiirl. I think this is very cool, and works nicely for the challenge at hand.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:55:38 GMT -8
Sean: Anya: Sean, we wanted edgy, you gave us edgy! This is a great job, I believe it's dark, unique, and different than the ordinary. I like the smoke effect and the makeup it just gives it that edge that I believe made it work so well. Jessica: This works well because of the black and white,The make up around your eyes and the smoke. Good Job! Tyyyrraaa: Well Mr. Ooopry, you are in your goth get up with that horrible make up job and then that haze of smoke billowing out of your mouth and your person. I have to say that I think the whole shot is very dark. Is it edgy? Sure I think it could have had more bite in it with a fierce looking pose since we do see so much of your body but the over all shot does work. I just love me some velvet coats. Nice touch.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:56:07 GMT -8
Natalia: EDGY Jessica: I am so glad you got on and submmited. Nothing bad to say Anya: This is great, Natalia. You caught edginess in this photo and I believe it just works amazingly with this challenge. It's like other worldly in a way and it's very unique and different. Tyyyrraaa: Ohhhh girl, everyone is workin' their make up today. This Natalia is not bad. I like the dark hair giiiirl and that wierd triangle silver thing on your face. But I will tell you, like I told Mr. Opry, work your body more in these edgy shots. Give it some sharpness. Now I know I didnt' say that to Mona but giiiirl she can't do much with just a neck and head and you decided to throw in torso and arms... so I want to see you workin' those body parts. Nice job though.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:56:29 GMT -8
Jason: Anya: I have to say I don't see this as edgy, Jason. You didn't bring anything different or intriguing to this shot. I think you might just be a commercial model more than the high end modelling. Your clothes and surrounding say more futuristic to me so if that is what we were looking for you got it but it didn't work for this challenge. Jessica: Looking at Seans and then Monas. I am saying this isnt edgy at all. I think u missed the mark. Sorry Tyyyrraaa: Hmm, Jaaaason, darling man o'man. This is another killer catalogue shot of you. I can be honest about that. I don't know but part of me thinks you should have done this for a catalogue instead of what you did submit. It's a good angle that the photographer used but you're just not dark enough, egdy in your pose or in the background. Sorry darling.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:56:52 GMT -8
Chanel: *Note pulled from roughs Jessica: I thin k u got the edgy clothes down but i wisdhs u would have done some type of makeup edgy Anya: I think those wings and the color make this shot very intriguing but other than that you didn't make it work and bring that extra edginess. I don't like that I had to pull this from your roughs since you didn't post in your finals. This just wasn't the best for me, Chanel, like I've been telling you to step it up. Tyyyrraaa: Well the outfit is edgy, I'll give you that Chanel and you are wooorkin' that booody giiirl. Trying to bring some angles into that shot. Perhaps that funky outfit is distracting a bit to really see what all you got goin' on with your body but it's still not bad. Decent enough.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:57:14 GMT -8
Guinevere: You wanted Edgy so I tried to get as edgy as I could! Anya: This is very edgy, Guin! I think you are the opposite of Jason, you are not a commercial model but you are an edgy model. This shot was very strange and unique, it has that glove as a hat, eyes as makeup, and those things for a bra. It has so many things that intrigue me, it's a good job for edgy and brought something new to the table. Jessica: Wow everything about this screams edgy but in a diff way then Sean and Mona. Good Job! Tyyyrraaa: Funky stuff goin' on here giiiirl. Yo' eyes are just wowing me and then that funky outfit. This hits the mark splendidly. Edgy is out there, drastic, different, artsy, it makes you want to step back and say Huh??? But still be a model. Nice job.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:58:50 GMT -8
Leah: Anya: I don't see this shot as very edgy shot. I mean your hair is edgy and I think your face has something extra in it but other than that it just doesn't sell to me. I wish you brought something more to this to make it edgier and more interesting but you did provide an awkwardness which is commendable. Jessica: This reminds me of your last photo and i dont see edgy in this at all. Sorry Tyyyrraaa: I'm gonna say it giiiirl. I wish you would start lookin' outside of FMD for you shots. You can find some good ones there but there are other modeling sites. FMD, I feel is limiting you but NOT knowing your model, perhaps you are already limited. Now this shot is alright. I cant' say it's overly edgy but it's not catalogue like either. Like so many others I wish you worked those angles on that pose more. You had the darkness of the make up down though and that stare is good.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 13, 2009 13:59:08 GMT -8
Alan: I found some photos I found this to be the best I am a nature boy by heart Jessica: This is sweet and innocent and doesnt look edgy to me at all. Anya: I thought this was kind of edgy at first sight, I mean it was different than what most would expect but then I thought it's different because it's not expected to be edgy. This is more innocent and more cutesy than edgy. I think this was a nice try to go out there but you didn't really go out there. Tyyyrraaa: Ohhhh I don't know Alan. I'm kind of torn about this one here chiiild. I do see the softness in this but it's an interesting shot. I like my edgy shots to be a little bit on the darker, razor edge sort of broken down doll like shots. But this has that artistic side to it that I also want to throw into an edgy side. I don't think all edgy shots have to be hard, cold and strong, but they have this artistic sort of quality to them that makes you want to stop and look, not just browse over. I don't dislike Alan... but I can't say it's really hitting it either.
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Post by Hilary on Oct 15, 2009 10:31:50 GMT -8
Good luck models! Eliminations will be up later!
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